I bought the second book, Ice Cream and Sadness, just a few days ago, and it's hilarious! I love the new comics, and the "Interactivities". I'm trying to do as many of these things as I can without being laughed or stared at.
I really like this series. It's like Dan Brown, but in a Flash presentation.
The animation is incredible, considering this is from 2004, even regardless of that. Incredible job.
Animation was good, and it was funny. I'm guessing that was your primary goal, so I have to say that you achieved it.
The whole thing was pretty nice, but as you said, the sound quality wasn't very good. What you need to do to fix this, is to go to your Publish Settings(Ctrl+Shift+F12) and go to the Flash tab. Then, where it says "Audio Stream", hit the "Set..." Button and change the bit rate to 64kbps and the quality to best. That should make it sound just like the timeline.
Very nicely done
Hilarious how you almost made this song sound good. The first time I watched this, somehow I didn't notice the little tongue thing when he did it. Very nice with that, too. It makes the song have some kind of appeal that I don't know, but it just makes it almost magical.
The animation could be a bit more fluent and a little less jerky, when the character moves to each side, he moves a little too much, even for exaggerated movement.
When a movie has medals
for sitting through the whole thing 3 times, one starts to wonder if the submission is there for quantity or quality. It really shows that you're proud of your work by bribing people to watch the whole thing. The animation was nice for most, but it was just too long.
the animation's alright, but the play button and the replay button(even though it isn't really a button) are too hard to press. next time, put a white rectangle behind the text so you can click it more easily. Other than that, a nice attempt for your first try.
Usually I don't like people who just submit a walk cycle. But this is different. You have appropriate music, the animation is very nice, and you have a real attention-grabbing cartoon, especieally since it's just a walk cycle. I like it.
thanks man, I wouldn't normally submit a walk sequence but I put about as much work into this as I have some other submissions. :)
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